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drazukiEDIT: Looks like ff.net or the author removed the story!
Compare with me, these two stories.
My friend's original fic.
A fanfic of someone who dares to call themselves a writer.
Finding Heaven, circa 2007, by Darkladyknight on fictionpress:
Armand Riesel of Riesel Hotel watched the blond in high heels walk down the steps of his mansion. He wasn’t really angry, not anymore. It was just too tiring to argue and fight, just wasn’t worth trying to make things work. Stopping at the bottom, the blond put one manicured red painted fingernail to the bottom of red painted lips before pale blue eyes came to him where he had stopped a few steps up.
“You’re still upset?” One perfectly shaped eyebrow rose with the question.
“No, Val, I’m not,” Armand said, coming down the rest of the way; he met the pale blue eyes. “Disappointed mostly.”
“Well I’m sorry,” Val said, still tapping a fingernail against the blood red bottom lip, “but you were too unreasonable Armand. You wanted something I couldn’t give.”
“I don’t find it all that unreasonable to expect my lover to be faithful,” Armand said, crossing his arms over his chest.
“You haven’t touched me in months; I got lonely.” Val said, turning to walk towards the living room.
Now read this, published YESTERDAY, by TwilightTsuki on fanficion.net, under D.Gray Man:
Yuu Kanda of Mugen Finances sighed as he watched a rather well dressed man walk down the steps of his mansion. His some what curly hair was pulled back with pins and down. Kanda felt drained, he had been so angry before but now... he wasn't really angry. Golden colored eyes stopped and looked at him with a question so boldly blazing within them.
“Your still upset? Really you should get over it. It wasn't anything big.” The man said with an eyebrow raised high.
“No... I'm not upset any longer. But none the less, it was a big incident. I'm just disappointed.” the dark haired man replied with a shake of the head.
“Well... for what its worth, I'm sorry.” The man said before shaking his head and shrugging. “But you were asking for far too much. More than I was willing to give. It was an absolutely unreasonable request.”
“Unreasonable? I don't really think asking my lover not to betray me, to be faithful is unreasonable Tykki.” Kanda hissed through his teeth.
“You hadn't touched me for months! I was lonely.” The man said turning away from Kanda and looking to the living room's entrance.
BLATANT WORD-FOR-WORD PLAGARISM! FROM AN BRILLIANT ORIGINAL PIECE OF WORK INTO A SHODY FANFIC! A FANFIC!!!!
For anyone who has ever felt that your work is your own, PLEASE INFORM THE MASSES.
And inform TwilightTsuki of Fanfiction.net of her poor, poor choice of actions.
Compare with me, these two stories.
My friend's original fic.
A fanfic of someone who dares to call themselves a writer.
Finding Heaven, circa 2007, by Darkladyknight on fictionpress:
Armand Riesel of Riesel Hotel watched the blond in high heels walk down the steps of his mansion. He wasn’t really angry, not anymore. It was just too tiring to argue and fight, just wasn’t worth trying to make things work. Stopping at the bottom, the blond put one manicured red painted fingernail to the bottom of red painted lips before pale blue eyes came to him where he had stopped a few steps up.
“You’re still upset?” One perfectly shaped eyebrow rose with the question.
“No, Val, I’m not,” Armand said, coming down the rest of the way; he met the pale blue eyes. “Disappointed mostly.”
“Well I’m sorry,” Val said, still tapping a fingernail against the blood red bottom lip, “but you were too unreasonable Armand. You wanted something I couldn’t give.”
“I don’t find it all that unreasonable to expect my lover to be faithful,” Armand said, crossing his arms over his chest.
“You haven’t touched me in months; I got lonely.” Val said, turning to walk towards the living room.
Now read this, published YESTERDAY, by TwilightTsuki on fanficion.net, under D.Gray Man:
Yuu Kanda of Mugen Finances sighed as he watched a rather well dressed man walk down the steps of his mansion. His some what curly hair was pulled back with pins and down. Kanda felt drained, he had been so angry before but now... he wasn't really angry. Golden colored eyes stopped and looked at him with a question so boldly blazing within them.
“Your still upset? Really you should get over it. It wasn't anything big.” The man said with an eyebrow raised high.
“No... I'm not upset any longer. But none the less, it was a big incident. I'm just disappointed.” the dark haired man replied with a shake of the head.
“Well... for what its worth, I'm sorry.” The man said before shaking his head and shrugging. “But you were asking for far too much. More than I was willing to give. It was an absolutely unreasonable request.”
“Unreasonable? I don't really think asking my lover not to betray me, to be faithful is unreasonable Tykki.” Kanda hissed through his teeth.
“You hadn't touched me for months! I was lonely.” The man said turning away from Kanda and looking to the living room's entrance.
BLATANT WORD-FOR-WORD PLAGARISM! FROM AN BRILLIANT ORIGINAL PIECE OF WORK INTO A SHODY FANFIC! A FANFIC!!!!
For anyone who has ever felt that your work is your own, PLEASE INFORM THE MASSES.
And inform TwilightTsuki of Fanfiction.net of her poor, poor choice of actions.
